I'm typing this from the floor. I love all the layers here. Metamorphosis, dependency, independency, domination and submission, amazing.

That picture is something I've seen in a dream....or nightmare, I can't decide.

I corrected my original comment. Apparently I can't spell when I type from the floor.
 

i will show you meaning -
as if your chrysalis
were dangling from the ball
of my tongue.

my favourite part here. i like the rawness and intensity in this one and also how its more difficult to open up the soul.
 

funny,i read the poem before the title and after, my entire idea of this changed. i love the last line, dangling fromt the ball of my tongue. there is so much in this short piece. perfect!
 

do you have a tongue ring?
p.s. you're the first to guess anna karina... :)
 

Another great one. :)

By the way, I love the "free cat" pic. That's hilarious.
 

ok that picture is scary.
nothing more sensual then dancing real close with the person you desire. and your words heighten it.
 

thanks for stopping by my blog...yours is very intersting, haven't quite seen another like it!
 

Those last four lines are starkly captivating. Ingeniously crafted, I'd say. ^_^

p.s.
Been reading past poems. Oh I truly relished reading, out loud, the one entitled "Subliminal."
 

Elle: don't you EVER try to delete a post on this site again ;-) I like the screw ups, they're somehow more *real* And thank you for the comments, I think your comments were better than the damned poem! You caught my themes...

Gulnaz: It is very raw. More raw than i could write. So I stopped there.

DeeM: Hmmm, how did they change once you saw 'parasitic' *clings to your shoulder*

Pott: Hey! thanks. I'm not sure what you'd call it, but it wouldn't fall under the Neo-Romantic movement.

Stella: I'll never tell. You can just guess.... AK = beautiful.

Twisted: Thanks!! The free cat was a little too lifeless for me... I wanted one that could chase balls of yarn and things.

Lorena: Yes, that pic really freaks me out to. It just caught the mood. You should see it on a white background site... it literally comes off the page.

Slade: Nice to meet you! I usually just post little thoughts that hit my brain, or put them to music. I'm harmless... *smirk*

Soulless: Nice to meet you too, I love your poetry on your site!!!! Its fantastic! Drill down to some of my older archives. They are mostly poetry, of a really screwed up mind....
 

"i will show you meaning -
as if your chrysalis
were dangling from the ball
of my tongue."

Beautiful lines.

Thanks for dropping by my blog and commenting. Look forward to seeing you around.
 

Thanks .:A:. I will surely see you around!