Fire Dancer . . .

. . . And there you are again

Bringing intensity to the twilight
Painted on the inside of my eyelids
Dancing like a flame,

Shadows playing tricks
on my astonished eyes.
As your fire burns.

Your sanguine coronet flickers
The searing rhythms spellbind,
And finally mesmerize me.

Dance with me, fire dancer,
In my mind again tonight
Paint my world with your flame.

Make me burn.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lookie what a little enjambment arranging can do? I like this. Surprised? But as a poem I saw it like this. I bet you are an auditory thinker, thinking in tunes,eh? I am a visual thinker, thinking in silence and interpreting with my eyes.

Yep, I lost it!
 

Glad you're back! :)

~Eyes
 

some things really are un-tamable like a fire dancer (and me) .. lol.. kidding.

i agree. good to see you back. and good to be back.
 

amazing!
 

Fire Dancer is really good man, not quite sure how I'd sing it, but I can hear you singing it. plumflowerembroidery.com is where you can hear my stuff by the way. I haven't figured out streaming audio yet, but the software is on it's way. I'll have to catch up with you next week cuz I'm outa town for the weekend.
 

mmm. what a great way to welcome us.
 

NICE! Dude, I was kidding around on my blog. Dont worry, you rule! Going into the studio Friday.
 

OoOoh, I really liked that!



Hey, I forgot to tell you I had problems with the songs I gave you for Skywriter. If you go to davedoobinin.com Click "music and video" up top, then at the bottom click "Live tracks and video this way." There's some live tracks there from when he was in Skywriter. "Longer" being my favorite. I was hoping you'd like what you heard. I'm REALLY loving Dave and Skywriter. I thought about you when I first heard it. ;)
 

Okay, so I'm listening to all of your mp3 again, and I have questions. Can I ask questions?

1. Who are your inspirations (musically) if any?

2. Who are your "favorite" bands and/or musicians?

3. What instruments do you play?

4. Do you or your band have any albums out there?

5. I know you can't really put music into a genre these days, but what kinda music do you listen to?

I'm being pushy, but maybe you could do a post about it all? Maybe you could tell me to shut up too? =D
 

Okay, one more and then I'm done. Where would you put yourself as far as genres? I'm guessing singer/songwriter?

Love singer/songwriters! Overflowing talent.
 

I'm STILL spamming you. Don't kick my ass. Anyhow, I got to listen to almost all of them, but then something happened and I can't listen to the rest. But, from what I heard, my favorites are "Hey Pretty" and "Funny How." From the tracks you have listed, do you have a favorite?

I KNOW I said one more, I lied? But, I didn't mean to!

I'm just on a nasty music kick tonight, well, every night, but I'm kickin' your stuff tonight. ;)
 

can't wait to hear the fire burning tune for this. will there be any?

welcome back! btw thanks for the lyrics. got it and will study it.
 

Your sanguine coronet flickers
The searing rhythms spellbind,
And finally mesmerize me.

You remind me of how, when I stare at the bonfire on a windless, moonless night... I would shed the here and now, then proceed to restructure memories. *wistful sigh*

You have been missed. ^_^
*hug*
 

Once again, great stuff!! Loved it.
 

ooh how passionate!
 

Wow. That's beautiful.
 

oh the fire burnin in my eyes..behind my lids...it's all for you Jaxe...all you all the time! ;P

yayaya...i know...PERV! that's me, that's right! ok ok seriously, that was very cool and now I have a great urge to eat some fire....pulling out stick from yard, gasoline...no wait, lighter fluid...rag...lighter....wtf do i do to protect my mouth? lick my lips...that's it! now i'm thinking very bad thoughts....i'll just go kick myself and run....cheers! miss ya! xo
 

oooh, hot hot hot!!! :))
 

Elle: Yes, that is much better structured like that. I'm more a chaos thinker . . . and enjambment is cool! *hug*

Eyes: Hello! Hey, drink at any underage events lately? ;-)

Stella: Untamable? Whoa. You little minx, I would've never gueesed ... ;-D

MissQ: Heya Q! Thank you.

Ticharu: Well, I've officially nicknamed you the Mad Scientist. I listened to some of your songs and they are a wild, chaotic crack high! (that's a compliment) :-) thanks for exposing me to that... *dizzy*

Trans: Hey traaaaaaaans. How are you? *smirk*

Neel: I didn't hear back from you yet, did you get anything down? Anxiously waiting some tunes ;-)

Jenn: L.M.F.A.O. I think you have a shorter attention span than I do. I did check out Dave Doobinin's site and the songs are very cool. Amazing the hundreds of thousands of artists that are talented you never even get to hear :-( As far as my music background, i'll post about it later I guess ;-) *hug*

Amie: Hey Amie, I hope you are well! Things around here are boring as usual, trying to get inspired.

Soulless: your words are my thoughts exactly. synchronicity. Miss you TOO! *sigh* *hug*

Kel: Hi Kel! How are things in your world ;-)

Lorena: Oh, I dabble in passion. Great drug! *smirk*

Mel: Hey Mel, yes, a little fire never hurt anyone... well, except perhaps Icarus ;-) *hug*

Queen: Thanks Q! Nice ass ;-D

Ruben: Thank you Ruben, hope you are behaving!

Barbie: thanks Barbie, ha! Heat is contagious...

Potted: Hey Kid, where ya been? May all your flowers bloom in autumn, er, something like that ;-)

Mitzzee: WOW! Pervo. If they ever put both of us in a room at the same time, they better pad the walls from the random kinetic energy that will be bouncing around at the speed of light! Nice post, mmm, lick your lips? yes, that should work ;->

Gulnaz: Hi Gul *hug* hope Your HighPoetess is doing well ;-)
 

mmmm-hmmm, like moths to the flame. Just LOOK at all the chicks in here! LOLOL! Got yo # now, J! LOL ;)
 

Lil Bit: Takes a whore to know one, LMAO! Just kidding, I shouldn't be that mean to the newbs ;-) And I'm not a whore, just a good Christian boy whose blog friends happen to be 95% female.....
 

..... did you buy that?
 

uh... no.
Ain't buyin' it.
WHORE!
LMAO