Monday, October 24, 2005
The View
The View
From here it looks perilous.
Little chance of survival
Harsh consequences
I never looked good behind the vertical
I was always considered highly centrifugal
Feel the rails slowly stretch
This screech of brakes
In this inevitable train wreck
Bulletproof armor is an everkiss
For lies dripped
Between Nosferatu lips
Worst case scenario, they eat my remains
As thoughts of sugar plums dance in their brains
The deceit and wrath and chaos came
And here I am
Left holding the Blame
Don’t trust my rancid naivete
Of faith in people
Who kill indiscriminately...
I must now hold my head up high
Tighten the noose on my necktie
And head down the path
In my switchblade eloquence
This view… so lovely
In its deadly accoutrements.
As the murmuring strangers
Gather near the front door
Of the Bed & Breakfast
They never paid for
# posted by Jaxe @ 10/24/2005 10:26:00 AM 
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Wow. This is just so intense and amazing. It gave me butterflies.
I feel like I'm about to go down that hill with you.
Hold on though because I think you can fly.
I feel like I'm about to go down that hill with you.
Hold on though because I think you can fly.
Scary looking hill... takes an adventurous soul to go down it... or a crazy one! LOL Which do you think?
Ignore those strangers, what do they know?
So, are ya 'fraid you're gonna drown if you hit that water? Aw, come on.... You know how to swim, don't ya? ;)
Ignore those strangers, what do they know?
So, are ya 'fraid you're gonna drown if you hit that water? Aw, come on.... You know how to swim, don't ya? ;)
Wow! That is great! Listened to most of your music over the weekend and damn is it good stuff. I love your version of Brown Eyed Girl!
Hey, great poem! Got music for it? I can picture music for it, pretty dark, it would be really interesting to work with.
I was going to tell yo what my favorite line is, but I can't. It's all absolutely amazing. Bravo. I really love this.
That picture reminds me of some hills I've skiied down. They never look that bad until you're at the very top looking down vertically.
Nice lyrics
Nice lyrics
O.k totally off topic cause I just ran across your blog via smallbitsoflife's. The song "October" AWESOME...Love it, great sounds your voice sounds oh so good. Whens the party for the album realease?. *S*
bloody cheapskates!
that was very cool as usual another Jaxe original...u rock bro!
"bro"...hahahahaha....that picture scares me. fyi. dorkie dead mitz ;)
that was very cool as usual another Jaxe original...u rock bro!
"bro"...hahahahaha....that picture scares me. fyi. dorkie dead mitz ;)
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: 10/26/2005 10:10 AM
: 10/26/2005 10:10 AM
deem: OMG, you DO live ;-) Yes, The View (tm) is scary, but hey, just think of the speed rush on the way doooooooooown. I hope my plumes hold me up.... thinks of Icarus. *hug*
queen of ass: Thank you! Yes, the noose / necktie is perfect. x.x
lil bit: Funny how people congregate to watch other people crash and burn. Seems they all take comfort in other people's pain. Yes, I can swim, but I'm thinking the *splat* on the dock will be too much ;-)
snavylyn: Thankee sai! Yay, someone listened to our music. If you hit the band site, those mp3's are from the whole band playing covers. The stuff here is just my 'solo' moods ;-)
awaterpixie: I thought it was a perfect marriage between poetic psychosis and art ;-) No children were harmed in the filming of this .. .
ticharu: YOU are the mad scientist, I'm sure you could come up with something incredible to those f'd up words ;-) I'll chew on it though. Its got to be something aggressive and dark and chaotic ;-)
thomcat: Heya ;-) Thanks! Everyone be sure to check out thomcat's site, good poetry and stuff there ;-)
elle: thanks elle *hug* I'll explain it later if I live through this cesspool of shit. Hope your new job is cranking!
ruben: LOL. Honestly, this is about that so feel free to use it and give it to your boss.... Hope you are behaving, I like your new template!
katie: Yay, a skiier (how the heck do you spell that!) that's why i just called it The View. We've all been there. You keep climbing and climbing, then finally look back and say "oh.my.god.what.have.i.done!" btw, they are not lyrics... hmmm.. yet ;-)
leslie: morbid? moi? *innocently evil smirk* yes, i'm a little stressed. think how boring i'd be if i were actually happy though. good to see ya !
mel: hey! yes, i'm on the edge... freaking again. seems a recurring theme around here ;-)
heather: welcome to The Mind and thank you! have a look around, its mostly poetry/prose and music (and HNT's, hehe). this is what is in my head. i am in a very strict discpline and need this place to escape, vent! Nice to meet you.
Lorena: HEY you! Thank you for taking time to read it. Now you see why I have to visit your site for redemption ;-) yours is always uplifting and keeps me balanced.
kaliblue: Nice to meet you kali and thanks so much! actually, our band is going to record some originals (nervous shake) and we're going to have a cd release gig in Indy this winter, yay! ps - we suck! but we have a blast!
dead mitz: *removes hat, kneels and bows* I'm sorry your dead mitz... ahhh, just another brilliant spirit that burned too hot and spontaneously combusted. *smirk* WTF woman? Don't leeeeeeeeeeave me.. Aaaaaaaaagh!
aisha: Hi hi! thank you for reading it. Somehow, your comments help calm me down. I swear this is therapy (and cheaper than my seven shrinks).
queen of ass: Thank you! Yes, the noose / necktie is perfect. x.x
lil bit: Funny how people congregate to watch other people crash and burn. Seems they all take comfort in other people's pain. Yes, I can swim, but I'm thinking the *splat* on the dock will be too much ;-)
snavylyn: Thankee sai! Yay, someone listened to our music. If you hit the band site, those mp3's are from the whole band playing covers. The stuff here is just my 'solo' moods ;-)
awaterpixie: I thought it was a perfect marriage between poetic psychosis and art ;-) No children were harmed in the filming of this .. .
ticharu: YOU are the mad scientist, I'm sure you could come up with something incredible to those f'd up words ;-) I'll chew on it though. Its got to be something aggressive and dark and chaotic ;-)
thomcat: Heya ;-) Thanks! Everyone be sure to check out thomcat's site, good poetry and stuff there ;-)
elle: thanks elle *hug* I'll explain it later if I live through this cesspool of shit. Hope your new job is cranking!
ruben: LOL. Honestly, this is about that so feel free to use it and give it to your boss.... Hope you are behaving, I like your new template!
katie: Yay, a skiier (how the heck do you spell that!) that's why i just called it The View. We've all been there. You keep climbing and climbing, then finally look back and say "oh.my.god.what.have.i.done!" btw, they are not lyrics... hmmm.. yet ;-)
leslie: morbid? moi? *innocently evil smirk* yes, i'm a little stressed. think how boring i'd be if i were actually happy though. good to see ya !
mel: hey! yes, i'm on the edge... freaking again. seems a recurring theme around here ;-)
heather: welcome to The Mind and thank you! have a look around, its mostly poetry/prose and music (and HNT's, hehe). this is what is in my head. i am in a very strict discpline and need this place to escape, vent! Nice to meet you.
Lorena: HEY you! Thank you for taking time to read it. Now you see why I have to visit your site for redemption ;-) yours is always uplifting and keeps me balanced.
kaliblue: Nice to meet you kali and thanks so much! actually, our band is going to record some originals (nervous shake) and we're going to have a cd release gig in Indy this winter, yay! ps - we suck! but we have a blast!
dead mitz: *removes hat, kneels and bows* I'm sorry your dead mitz... ahhh, just another brilliant spirit that burned too hot and spontaneously combusted. *smirk* WTF woman? Don't leeeeeeeeeeave me.. Aaaaaaaaagh!
aisha: Hi hi! thank you for reading it. Somehow, your comments help calm me down. I swear this is therapy (and cheaper than my seven shrinks).
In my switchblade eloquence
This view… so lovely
In its deadly accoutrements.
Love, love, love this. ^_^ It feels good to visit here again. Ooh, and I see you have more treats for your readers now. Hee. I'm enjoying looking at the pics (especially the one with the white kiddie shirt. Haha.) *hug*
This view… so lovely
In its deadly accoutrements.
Love, love, love this. ^_^ It feels good to visit here again. Ooh, and I see you have more treats for your readers now. Hee. I'm enjoying looking at the pics (especially the one with the white kiddie shirt. Haha.) *hug*
30 Something: Thank you SOOOO much ;-) That's it, you get a free cd when we get one made this winter. Take care, friend !
Scruuw: Heya Scru. Thanks for stopping by and, yes, that pic slays me. Pretty appropriate for my life right now.
Soullless: SOULLLLLLLL! *hugggg* oh man, I missed you, thanks for coming back by. Life STINKS right now... hopefully I will have a moment to get timeless entranced again over at your place. *hug again*
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Scruuw: Heya Scru. Thanks for stopping by and, yes, that pic slays me. Pretty appropriate for my life right now.
Soullless: SOULLLLLLLL! *hugggg* oh man, I missed you, thanks for coming back by. Life STINKS right now... hopefully I will have a moment to get timeless entranced again over at your place. *hug again*
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